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Monday, 21 November 2016

Athetics

On Friday the 11 of November we had Athletics at Pt England School.The whole school did it but some people didn’t come.


On athletics day there were lots of sports like Javelin,Relays,Tug-o-war,High jump and more.Some sport were held by the youthtown and some sports were out of school.Also after school my dad said that when I did high jumps I ran then I stop and my dad said to jump and my sister was laughing at me.



My Favourtie three sports were Relays,Tug-o-war and Dodgeball I like Relays beacause when you run there is fresh air also I came 2nd ,3rd, 4th and 6th.Now for the tug-o-war I like that one beacuse we came second place and we tried.Now for the last sport I like that one beacause I stayed alive for a long time also it was fun runing aroung and escaping.Also all of the teachers did a good job siting up and Miss Va’afusuaga allways dose a amazing job at planning everything and geting all of the sports gear.

Wow look how much kids there are.


15 comments:

  1. Hi leilani I really love your writing keep writing so you might be the good writer in Rm 13 keep up the great work good job leilani.

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    1. That's nice to say to Leilani Rozaidah .

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    2. Thank you Rozaidah and Madison you are right bye :)

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  2. Hi Leilani I love how you are interesed in sports . I also like how you used your commas in your awesome list of sports . Relays are my favourite games . I like that we have somthing in commin . I like the picture of athletics . I hope your have a great day and get more comments bye leilani .

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    1. Thank you Madison you have wirten a good coment bye :)

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  3. Hi lei I really like your writing and also I like how you put lots of ideas in the was awesome lei keep it up.

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    1. Thank you Efe-Lata thank you so much bye :)

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  4. hello leilani i love your story about Athletics because you had commos and full stop at the end of your story.

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    1. Thank you Mata for this nice comment bye :)

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  5. hi leilani i enjoyed reading your story because it had lots of detail.i look forward to read your next story.

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    1. Thank you Mata for this comment Bye :)

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  6. hello Leilani you have a nice story.

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  7. I like your photos because it had a lot of detail. I enjoyed reading your story because you wrote in detail paragraphs.

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    1. Thank you Tayah you are a great wirter too Bye :)

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