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Thursday, 18 August 2016

Derek Redmond hamstring

In 1992 in the Olympics in Barcelona  a man named  Derek Redmond is about to do the 400 meters race. He  is also  from British.Before the race starts  he  is feeling  so worried.He also might be so nervous because he want’s  to win and if he doesn't win his contree might be mad at him.

When the race started Derek Redmond was running so fast that  his hamstring snapped.He was  in lots of pain and he started to cry also he was so upset because he did not impress his dad.But he did not give up at all so he just started to hop on one leg.

When Derek Redmond broke his hamstring halfway to the finish line  his father  Jim Redmond came to help him   walk.Derek Redmond is an amazing athlete because he is always trying his best and he keeps  going even if he is in pain. You never give up  at thing and you never quit. When Derek Redmond dad was helping him walk to the finish line.

6 comments:

  1. Great writing leilani i like how you added detail to your writing.I hope more people comment on you blog from madiosn bye

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    1. Thank you Madison.Keep pu the great work too.

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  2. This is fantastic Leilani! I love your speech bubbles and how you explained how Derek must have been feeling. Good on you for always using capital letters and full stops! :) - Miss Scanlan

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    1. Thank you Miss Scanlan.

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  3. dear liliani i like your work from Rozaidah

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    1. Tahnk you Rozaidah.keep up the work too.

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