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ℂ𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕧𝕖 𝕎𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘!

walt: choose an appropriate text form.

Task Description:

Our learning intetion this week was to create a creative writing based upon one image from five. My image includes a young boy was a fear expression from below his bed. My writing I've presented can be found on slide six. Before writing I choose to brainstrom some ideas then write. With my writing I choose to create a underworld portal! Unfortunatly my writing hasn't been fully completed, which I'm hoping to complete some day soon. ENJOY!

Leilani - Creative writing - Superpowers!

Walt: Write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

Intro
What IF I had as many powers as I want and what ever powers I want? Well the answer to that question would be impossible to have in real life , but my DREAM power would be very helpful to all. Nice to meet yah my name superpower name is MR! ( Aka Mind reader! )

Body paragraph 1
The question that most people ask me is , how did I get my mind reading super powers? It all started in 2007 I was eight or something ( how am I supposed to know!? ) Anyways , one day at home on a Wednesday ( yes , maybe I was wagging ) I wanted to know what my mother was thinking about me weather she loved me or not. I fell asleep and had a very interesting dream. As soon as I woke up from my nap I felt a little bit dizzy and really tried. Two long hours later I looked at my mother and saw what she was thinking. I wondered what was happening weather it was a prank or not! I end up getting the hang of it and I figured out how to use my power to help the world out more.

Body paragraph 2
As for my dream power I would like MIND READING , the mind reading helps me read people’s mind. My mind reading power from my point of view looks like the a huge blue board with what they are thinking , about them , what they like , strength and weakness , but mostly what they were/are thinking. I even can see what the person wish is! While I mind read others mind I mostly feel like a stalker invading their privacy without their permission but I SOMETIMES I do ask for permission. Did you know that I give them their wish and the next day on the news it says something marvelous?

Paragraph 3
Well , I could use my superpowers for giving or making people wishes or what they need come true. Not because they want them it’s because they might need it. I could use my superpowers in the world to help homeless people or normal people that are in need to get what they want or need. Like giving them a job , better life , education and much more that would help them out a lot.

Conclusion
I say that having mind reading powers would be awesome is because I get to help people on what they want and I just pretty cool to read others minds. Mind reading is a pretty cool super power. If you had any superpower what would it be?

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Task Description:
Today's task we got to chose what ever superpower we would like and write all about it. This here is called creative writing. The reason why I love creative writing is because I can come up with different creative ways to write my story's about and be creative to write about. Creative writing makes me think really hard!

Leilani - Creative Writing

Walt: create a piece of writing using my sense 
Walt: to create a strong plan before I begin my writing. 

Creative Writing

Task: Using the above picture imagine that you are there think about all of your senses with your writing.

Planning: Answer all of the questions in the plan to help you think about what you are doing and why you are there to give you ideas.

Where abouts are you?	I am in a Woodhill forest.
What can you see?	I can see trees , leaves and planets.
What can you hear?	I can hear birds swooping around and when I walk I can hear the leaves moving.
What can you taste?	I can taste some delicious chicken sandwich with hummus and crackers.
What can you smell?	I can smell nature.
What can you feel?	I  can feel my food and I can feel the leaves.
Who are you with?	Jordin.
What are you doing?	We are going on a walk in the forest and we stop by a tree to eat our lunch.
Why are you doing what you are doing?	So that we can get fit and that we get out of the house.

Sentence Starters - One cold autumn day….. One sunny afternoon….. One sunny autumn morning….

Writing: Start you writing here

One sunny autumn morning Jordin and I decided to go on a walk to Woodhill forest. So we packed our lunches and we put Jordin's tiger in the car and off we went to Woodhill forest. Once we got there we unpacked our things out of the car and we started to walk. When we were walking Jordin and I were talking about  how delicious our lunch is going to be and we were talking about the lovely nature. Jordin’s tiger was protecting her because her dad told the tiger to do what he said. ”Isn’t this nice”said Jordin.” Yes it is so lovely”. I think it is time to eat our lunch” I said. .”Okay”said Jordin. So we sat down to eat. It was very hot and sunny so we found a nice big tree to sit under. ”Mmm, this looks so yummy” I said. “Yes it is”said Jordin. I love hummus that is my favourite dip. While we were eating Jordin also feed her tiger. When we were eating our food our view of the trees were amazing I could see a bird it is red and yellow.After we ate our food we decided to go home because it was getting late.Once we got home we had a wash and Jordin’s tiger went to sleep.It was very cold when we left the forest because it was about 6:00 pm at night.

Task description - Today Room 8 literacy had to do an writing activity based off one picture.This activity was super fun and I did this with my friend Jordin. Please check out her blog and leave a positive comment. JORDIN. Thanks to Miss Parrant for letting us do this.If you enjoy this please share with your family or friends.Also you can leave a positive comment (if you like).God bless , stay safe and BYE BYE!!