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Thursday, 5 March 2015

Our waiata

At first I felt excited.  then we sing and dace.  at the end I felt happy because I was proud of my silfe. 


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  1. Unknown5 March 2015 at 16:27

    Have a look how I've rewritten your post: At first I felt excited. Then we sang and danced. At the end I felt happy because I was proud of myself.

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  2. Unknown5 March 2015 at 16:28

    Very well done :)

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