Room 14,
Pt England School,
Pt England.
10/8/15
Dear Awkward Guys,
Yesterday, I saw you having serious problems running down the road in your brand new running gear. It looked like you were really in need of some help, so I decided to write to you to give you two tips.
Firstly you should look straight ahead. if you don't then you will bump into the car and people.
You have to bend your arms to make you more powerful. If you don't then you will be awkward.
Secondly you should run on your tip toes so that you be good at running and you are going to win.
Hope that helps.
From room 14
Hi leilani I like how you describe the bend your arm see you later bye bye and good work
ReplyDeleteSome good advice Leilani. I like how you used "If you don't ...".
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