Leilani - Creative Writing

Walt: Write using humor
Creative Writing
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Hi there , I see you ( not ) but welcome to MY story about a extremely , hard escape room that let say some people took. At the end they passed and won some things that weren’t what you could imagine someone would’ve owned ( that reason is because it actually money! ). Let’s get this rumble on! ( Aka let me start telling you this story ).

As Fall and Nathan ( the main characters ) entered the extremely hard escape room , they took a 360 look around the room to get a idea look. As both walked into the escape room the door shut locked behind them. “ You , “ “ Ah! “ yelled Fall because she got a fright from the loud speaker. “ YOU may start , good luck! MUAHAHAHA “. 5 minutes passed , 10 minutes passed , 20 minutes passed and now 30 minutes passed. What have they been doing for the pass 30 minutes!? “ Fall , have you found ANY clues! “ said Nathan in an angry tone , “ Have you!? “ replied Fall. ( Pause ) , so they are not going well at all maybe they need more time? As another 20 minutes passed both Fall and Nathan found ¼ of clues which didn’t really help them at all!

After 10 minutes of Nathan sitting down while Fall is doing most of the work , he finally helped. “ Shh “ said Fall , they both turned around and saw that the wallpaper had ripped off the wall! “ DUN DUN DUNNNN!! , “ “ okey? “ said Nathan while laughing. They looked closer. “ M , L , L , I? “. Hmm , what could that mean? , “ I MIGHT KNOW! “ screamed Fall , Nathan on the other hand was clueless. ( That’s his problem that he didn’t HELP! , anyways moving on ). As Fall was gathering clues that she had already found , Nathan seemed to find three clues and gave them to Fall. “ Hey Nathan “ said Fall , “ Can you please help me with this I think that you would figure something out , “ “ Sure! , while I was sitting down I had a feeling you would ask me to do something like this so , I waited “ replied Nathan. Fall didn’t really care.

“ 10 minutes remaining! “ said the loud speaker. Both Fall and Nathan started freaking out and worrying about if they were going to escape or not! “ There! “ Nathan found out that each clue had a letter that spelt something , but he wasn’t too sure. “ WHAT! “ shouted Fall , Nathan told her what he had found out. “ Well in this first clue there is the letter I , as in this clue the letter is O , then in this there is another letter I. Now all the letters in these clues are I , O and I “ . “ Great idea , I think we have to place all letters together and it will come up with a seven letter word since there are seven spaces on this word lock. “ Maybe let’s put I , O , I from the clues together with M , L , L , I from the wall paper tearing off the wall all together “ explained Nathan. “ Sure , but there is only one letter left to find. As before they started the escape room they got given an Ipad with on clue , the clue said “ One of your name initial goes with the name lock. ( Are you at the end of your chair? , GOOD! ) “ N “ Shouted Fall. While they were coming up with different word I would say that the funniest word they came up with was nothing! , because they already knew the word MILLION! They entered Million to the pin pad as well as the word lock. “ BEE PPPP “ The door unlocked!

“ CONGRATULATIONS! Nathan and Fall! , you both have won one million dollars each! “ cheered a guy in a very fancy suit with a unique blue bowtie. As Nathan and Fall walked into the room full with balloons and confetti their faces were full with gratefulness! As well as happiness! Many hours later Nathan and Fall got received there money and went back home to enjoy the money. THE END. Hopefully you enjoyed this story!!

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Task Description:For this task we are doing a creative writing about anything but it must be sensible. Mine is about an extremely funny escape room. As for this writing I wrote one introduction , three main body's and one conclusion. Our goal for this writing was to make a good writing with good punctuation also to make the story funny.