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Thursday, 15 November 2018

Leilani - Kimangi!

Walt: To write a creative piece of writing.

Sitting there with excitement Leilani was thinking , Kawau Island! Best place ever , and we’re going this week! Now that's what I call the best camp ever! ( Few hours later. ). As the year six campers were travelling on their long journey to Kawau Island. The students of 2018 year 6 campers from Pt England School had noticed that it started to get gloomy , and the sky was getting darker every minute. What could possibly be going on? Well I don’t know. All a sudden the captain of the ferry was speaking through a microphone , “ Excuse me all passengers on the Kawau Kat ferry going to Kawau Island , i’m your captain. Captain Boots , but you can call me Captain B. Anyways , we are going to stay out in the ocean for quite some time. This reason is because “( breaking out sound. ). We are now officially in the middle of nowhere! Thought Leilani. But hours later after their long adventure they had arrived at a very strange island. Leilani thought , that this couldn’t be it.

As Leilani placed her left foot onto the dock she felt a sense of relive. But that wasn’t the end of her adventure. As all of the passengers on the Kawau Kat ferry set foot on the mysterious island all the teachers realized that this wasn’t Kawau Island , they also noticed that the Kawau Kat ferry was nowhere to be seen! “ Dang , this turned into a GREAT sounding camp to a upside down dangerous adventure!” said Leilani with fear. Unexpectedly a roaring voice travelled through the mysterious island. “ Hello! , my name is Bentley. I know it’s like the car. Moving on , today you all have come not to Kawau Island but to C Island. Every single one of you’s are going to play Kimangi , you have no choice to participate because you already are! No going back! Helpful facts you WILL be needing throughout Kimangi , is you all have THREE chances. Use them wisely. Another helpful fact you will need for Kimangi is ( silence ) nothing I guess. Good luck and may the force be with you! “. From then and on Leilani felt that there were going to be more nerve wracking announcements about to be told to herself and her friends.

“ Mr Goodwin what the heck is going on!? “ said Leilani , “ well , i’m not sure. I’m going to take the best group. Bentzon. ( Wink wink. ) I will take them and some teachers. “ replied Mr Goodwin. Quite some time later they were off , going on a great ADVENTURE! As they started walking for quite some time it seemed like there were animals or humans living in the woods ( not necessary at all. ) , not long ahead of them they started to hear sticks jumping? Not even sure themself! The teachers instructed them to stop , then suddenly they all heard two people screaming very LOUD. From who knows where! They all sprinted towards the two loud screams , and they found Peter and Erin. Sitting in chairs with sticks surrounding them! “ Thanks for coming , um can you please move all of those sticks! “ said Peter , they moved the sticks away and they ran for their lives! As they stopped for a break they all surrounded a pile of sticks , and Peter and Erin updated them with what’s going on. Wow , there was a lot of things going on. That’s for sure!

They were all so confused , meanwhile back at the rest of the campers , the Kawau Kat ferry came to pick up them up! Why didn’t the others stay!? Moving on , they walked even further and Peter and Erin told them more information on what was going on. Apparently were they were Wallabies were taking over , and they needed to get onto the next level. NEXT LEVEL , what the heck! This means there is another level , what could it be now? Thought Leilani. Well up ahead of them they found a two level home with sticks , leaves , trees all over the place! “ No way that this was a haunted mansion house! “ whispered Leilani , “ Yep , it definitely is. “ replied Peter. Wow , it all suddenly went completely silent. They slowly approached the haunted mansion house. As they got closer and closer to the haunted mansion house they heard the wind whooshing from side to side! Leilani started to get chills. They tip toed inside of the haunted mansion house , i’m not sure why we didn’t go around. Anyways , as they entered Leilani saw in the corner of her eye’s floating chips! Then they all heard a loud crunch , hahaha the ghost was eating chips! Mr Goodwin joined the ghost by eating his morning tea chips , and everyone joined in. After their short break they stopped eating and carried on with their adventure. All a sudden Leilani heard the sound of ocean waves! But what if it’s just a prank? What could this sound be?

Dun dun dunn , it was nothing! But all they found was a button , and of course they pressed it. ( Wait , why was there a button? Moving on. ) “ Dear you , thank you for playing Kimangi. Hopefully ALL of you participants have made it through Kimangi. Now you may leave C Island and enjoy the rest of your life. Good bye. “ spoke a mysterious voice. Finally they could leave. Leilani was extremely excited to leave Kimangi behind. As they were leaving C Island Leilani felt that there were more crazy ADVENTURE’S heading her way.

Task Description:
For our task we wrote a creative writing that involes our trip to Kawau Island. In my story I wrote Kimangi. Kimangi is where Jimangi and Kawau Island mixed together. But as for Kimangi there is only two levels. I tried hard in these writing , I also wrote one introduction , three main paragraphs and one conclusion. I loved this creative writing because I got to use my imagination and yeah. 

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