Explanation Writing! { W4T1 }

Steps:
1 - information
2 - Introduction
3 - conclusion

S:E:E
Statement
Explanation
Example

Ideas 1:
Who is she?

Idea 2:Willing to be patient. 

Idea 3:
Sense of humor.

Title:
An admirable person

Introduction:
We all have someone we admire. Whether it be a family member, friend or a celebrity. They all have different reasons why we admire them, or maybe it’s their occupation which makes us look at them like superheroes! Who do you admire the most?

Information:
Idea 1:
Deloris Van Cartier who starred in Sister Act is my admirable person! This remarkable film was based around a well known singer who chose to make a new lifestyle. She taught a group of unbehaved students how to sing in a beautiful way although they had a bad attitude!

Idea 2:
Throughout Sister Act Deloris had patience for all her students. And with the patience she had for them they gained talent and all worked together. Without all the patience she had for her new class they would’ve been a dreadful choir class! But with her calmness and her students cooperating they had a successful competition!

Idea 3:
Willing to have a sense of humor towards your students wouldn’t make any conversations awkward and can bring the confidence out of anyone! With the humor Deloris had her students were never shy during their lessons together! Her humor was a blessing which always made her students smiling!

Conclusion:
Having someone to look up to, their advice can always lead us into a better future. Not just for ourselves but for future generations and that’s simply what Deloris Van Cartier exemplified to us all! Having patience and a sense of humor can be very good advice for those new ongoing teachers. Do you admire Deloris Van Cartier? Or do you admire someone else?