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walt: write for a specific purpose
Task Description:
This week for writing we focused on another persuasive piece. Our persuasive writing was all about Rona and The Moon. This story is a well known story throughout New Zealand and it's important that we know and hear this story muiltple times for us to teach generations to come. With today's task we firstly focused on planning our writing. Finding five points to prove weither we agree with our focus or disagree with our focus. Then we selected two main points to focus on throughout our writing piece. My writing can be found within the planning doc or the last slide of this presentation. ENJOY!
Kia ora Leilani,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you chose to write a personal response from Marama about Rona's behaviour. You have helped the reader to understand how upset Marama was and that Rona needed to make better decisions - well done Leilani!